My second attempt at a design for hitRECord’s typography project.  Some of you have seen this in 237 variations in e-mails, and I thank you for it.  But if anyone else has suggestions on how to improve it, please tell me.  Even if it’s “shift x 2 pixels to the left and 4 down.”  In fact, that amount of specificity would be fantastic.  Any thoughts?

My second attempt at a design for hitRECord’s typography project.  Some of you have seen this in 237 variations in e-mails, and I thank you for it.  But if anyone else has suggestions on how to improve it, please tell me.  Even if it’s “shift x 2 pixels to the left and 4 down.”  In fact, that amount of specificity would be fantastic.  Any thoughts?

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